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B. C. Taylor's avatar

Very nice! I'm already invested in the characters. I would read on with confidence.

Jonathan Galan's avatar

The ollie that didn’t take, got me.

John Williams's avatar

I’m entertained and ready for what’s next.

michael robbins's avatar

You are a reader of no small note, so this is encouraging.

Jonathan Galan's avatar

You had me laughing 30 seconds in; that is a win.

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

A pageturner for sure-- even in digital, endless scroll format. Loved the dialogue, the asides, the absurdist humor that parallels everyday life. Please continue.

michael robbins's avatar

Ah, thank you much. Next chapter coming soon.

Ed Park's avatar

Liked this a lot!

michael robbins's avatar

Ah, thanks, Ed. I suppose I’ll post the next chapter in a few days.

Kevin Hyde 's avatar

Yeah, definitely keep going! Really fun

Manil's avatar

Of course continue!